Thursday, January 28, 2010
Personal narrative with song lyrics
Every morning I feel like I am in a book that a person is reading over and over ,because i have to go to school and do my work to get a good grade .I get it I have to do my work ,but us kids sometimes get tired .It's like eating rice every year won't you get tired ."Of course".Then when you go home you sometimes fel like a slave ,because your parent tell you get me water and then they drink some of it and they are next to the table and your a little bit further and they tell you put this on the table and of course we are going to do it or else we get in trouble .Then we sometimes work hard and some people say no .Do it over again like we don't have things to do .It's like we are working ;because we have to go to school and then go home to do more work.Then later on we take a little break .Then go back to work and do stuff around the house .I know we are kids and learning stuff for the future .Come on people just let us workers have some fun and take a day off .A day less won't damage nothing just relax and go esay on us we aren't in collage yet .So don't make us work to much.
Expository Essay
The book i am reading is called "she died too young".The authors name is Lurlene Mcdaniel.I think the book is very intresting. This is a book a person might want to read ,because it got my attention to read.I just read she died too young and i was like ohhh i want to read this book.
At the beging of the book it was kinda confusing.So chelsea is writting to katie .Meanwhile she is at the hospital.So Chelsea and her mom are going to stay at Katie's house and Chelsea and her mom are waitting for news to know about the heart transplant .Later on chelsea and katie meet a new friend that is going throw the same thing as them and they become fast friends with Jillian .Then Jillian has a brother and Chelsea starts to have feeling for Jillian's brother.Then Chelsea's medical situation starts to grows.Later on Chelsea get her heart transplant and she said what is the whole point you should of given the heart to someone else and it's the same thing as my old heart.She said all of that to the doctor.Chelsea felt said that not even Katie could cheer her up. so then Katie comes to the room with a VCR and the nurse brings a tape and the remote control.Then Chelsea sys that stupid tape won't make me happy .Then she wanted to know what the tape was so then she press play on the control .She heres Jillians voice and Jillian was talking and Chelsea got happy .Then Chelsea said live on the tape that was Jillian's face and tracing her face with her finger on the t.v.So thats way I thought this book was intresting.
At the beging of the book it was kinda confusing.So chelsea is writting to katie .Meanwhile she is at the hospital.So Chelsea and her mom are going to stay at Katie's house and Chelsea and her mom are waitting for news to know about the heart transplant .Later on chelsea and katie meet a new friend that is going throw the same thing as them and they become fast friends with Jillian .Then Jillian has a brother and Chelsea starts to have feeling for Jillian's brother.Then Chelsea's medical situation starts to grows.Later on Chelsea get her heart transplant and she said what is the whole point you should of given the heart to someone else and it's the same thing as my old heart.She said all of that to the doctor.Chelsea felt said that not even Katie could cheer her up. so then Katie comes to the room with a VCR and the nurse brings a tape and the remote control.Then Chelsea sys that stupid tape won't make me happy .Then she wanted to know what the tape was so then she press play on the control .She heres Jillians voice and Jillian was talking and Chelsea got happy .Then Chelsea said live on the tape that was Jillian's face and tracing her face with her finger on the t.v.So thats way I thought this book was intresting.
VOCABULARY NARRATIVE
Vocabulary narrative
Noun
Charity: generous actions or donations to aid the poor, ill , or helpless: to devote one’s life to charity.
Noun
Charity: generous actions or donations to aid the poor, ill , or helpless: to devote one’s life to charity.
Monday, January 25, 2010
WHERE I'M FROM
Where I’m from
I am from Los Angeles.
My mom is from Salvador.
So I am half Salvador and the other half is from Los Angeles California.
I think Los Angeles is cool, because it’s not like other places that get so cold
And here is like the right temperature
Also that theirs a lot of malls and not far away
And theirs a lot of stuff to do here
I am from Los Angeles.
My mom is from Salvador.
So I am half Salvador and the other half is from Los Angeles California.
I think Los Angeles is cool, because it’s not like other places that get so cold
And here is like the right temperature
Also that theirs a lot of malls and not far away
And theirs a lot of stuff to do here
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